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unsaid
Three words unsaid
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I Pledge Allegiance
I pledge allegiance,
to the flag,
of the United States of America,
and to the Republic,
for which it stands,
one nation,
under a religion not solely represented by all members of its citizenship, a grave
misconception that should be removed from this pledge, and changed to
accompany the fact that America is made of many different religions,
indivisible, unless it comes to controversial issues such as abortion or gun
control, gay marriage or the death penalty, and divided in two by liberal, open
minded people and conservatives,
with liberty and justice for all, unless of course you're Muslim or homosexual, in
which case you will b
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My shot at a six-word story. The folks at 
make it look so easy, but cramming a lot into six words isn't exactly something just anyone can do.
Someone's probably done this one already, but who can help it?
make it look so easy, but cramming a lot into six words isn't exactly something just anyone can do.Someone's probably done this one already, but who can help it?
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactHave you submitted this to #SixWordStories yet? I haven't seen it in the backroom, and I've no doubt it would go through without trouble because it's quite good <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> if anyone's put a courtroom drama into six words, I certainly haven't seen it.I love how much story has been crammed in here, yet how lacking we are in detail about anything at all. We don't know what the trial was about or anything really, but it doesn't matter. You really cut through to the heart of a larger story in an impressive way.
I get to see every story that comes through #SixWordStories, and this is a really good one, easily one of the better ones I've seen in a while <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)"/> It's always nice to see one that doesn't rely on romance or generalities for a change. Really well done you <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>